I really like the pictures you chose, I think they fit really well with the text. You didnt use any special effect to enter and exit the pictures and text and I think that it worked really well with the suject. The only suggestion I have is to slow down the transition some to give the reader time to absord the writing and think about it. There wasn't enought time to read the words before it changed.
I know you were trying to make the images fade away. Good luck on that. It looks cool anyway. Good use of images to accentuate the text. I could tell that the pictures help one word or idea jump out in each section. That's like how the Beastie Boys have one person singing, and at the end of each line, the others chime in on the last word. It helps with the beat.
I really like the pictures you chose, I think they fit really well with the text. You didnt use any special effect to enter and exit the pictures and text and I think that it worked really well with the suject. The only suggestion I have is to slow down the transition some to give the reader time to absord the writing and think about it. There wasn't enought time to read the words before it changed.
ReplyDeleteI know you were trying to make the images fade away. Good luck on that. It looks cool anyway. Good use of images to accentuate the text. I could tell that the pictures help one word or idea jump out in each section. That's like how the Beastie Boys have one person singing, and at the end of each line, the others chime in on the last word. It helps with the beat.
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